Will you read my poem, if you must?

a lot of big words. had trouble understanding half of it. NOT THAT THAT'S A BAD THING!!! it must be because i'm young. but i liked the whole haunting, ghostly metaphor (i think it's a metaphor). and i also loved that you named it after the last words. cute. the rhyming is something that i would never be able to do. but keep writing how you're writing because you are an awesome writer!